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PET冲刺备考:写作提分例句宝典(二)

2020-04-09 14:03:47
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  除了在句式上长短句相结合准确表达外,建议考生要使用一些特殊的句式,以使句型多样化。句型多样化也是PET作文得到高分的条件之一。除了我们之前经常提到的高分句式,如倒装句、强调句、状语前置、插入语等。

  1.美洲豹是一种形体似猫的大动物,产于美洲。

  弃绝平庸的句子:

  Pumas are large, cat-like animals. They live in America.

  背诵漂亮的句子:

  Pumas are large, cat-like animals which are found in America.

  本句亮点及笔记:

  当前一句末尾一个名词和后一句开头的名词或代词重合时,可以用定语从句巧妙地将两个分散的句子合二为一,就像“成语接龙”游戏一样。

  2.当伦敦动物园接到报告说,在伦敦以南45英里处发现一只美洲豹时,这些报告并没有受到重视。

  弃绝平庸的句子:

  When London Zoo received reports which said that a wild puma had been spotted forty-five miles south of London, they were not taken seriously.

  背诵漂亮的句子:

  When reports came into London Zoo that a wild puma had been spotted forty-five miles south of London, they were not taken seriously.

  本句亮点及笔记:

  西方的文化精神意志表现为对“客观性”的重视。以物为主体,以自然为本位。而中国文化则以人为中心主义,认为世间一切皆因人的活动。因此,讲 地道的英语句子的第一步就是改变一切句子用“人”作主语的习惯,学会直接用“物”做主语。

  这一点要掌握起来其实很简单,只要多多地给客观存在的物体赋予生命,用孩子的眼睛去观察这个世界,就达到目的了。比如大人们漫不经心的一句“我看到窗台上有一封信”,会被可爱的孩子们描述成童话般的话“啊,一封信飘到我的窗台上来啦!”

  3.可是,当动物园的专家们收集到越来越多的证据之后,他们感到有必要进行一番调查,因为他们发现凡是声称见到过美洲狮的人们所描述的情况竟是出奇的相似。

  弃绝平庸的句子:

  However, when experts from the Zoo received more and more evidence, they felt obliged to investigate. Because they found that those who claimed to have seen the puma gave the same descriptions.

  背诵漂亮的句子:

  However, as the evidence began to accumulate, experts from the Zoo felt obliged to investigate, for the descriptions given by people who claimed to have seen the puma were extraordinarily similar.

  本句亮点及笔记:

  中文习惯长句中用一个主语贯穿到底,以人物主要动作的串联来表达一个复杂的事件。可这样的句子在英文中是败笔。英文句子强调灵活变动,可以把主语不同的小句子通过不同连词巧妙而紧密地连接起来。

  例句:当他们最终看见小男孩的时候,他们的不耐烦难以抑制,就要爆发了,因为他们发现小男孩带来的邮件不是他们想要的。

  4.房子一般有3层楼高,用石块修建。

  弃绝平庸的句子:

  Houses, which were often three storeys high, were built of stone.

  背诵漂亮的句子:

  House-often three storeys high-were built of stone.

  本句亮点及笔记:

  当定语从句和主句存在系动词的明显重复时,可以视情况将定语从句改写成插入语成分。改写的条件是:定语从句的关系词在从句中做主语。我们需 要做的仅仅是把关系词和系动词一并省略,再在两端加上破折号,原句的美容手术就做好啦。

  5.尽管她上了年纪,但体态确实优美。

  弃绝平庸的句子:

  Although she was very old, she was very graceful indeed.

  背诵漂亮的句子:

  Despite her great age, she was very graceful indeed.

  本句亮点及笔记:

  太多的从句会使文章显得拖沓。本句避免了主语she重复的现象,使得整句话简洁而干净。以后想用although从句时应该多想想,可否换个角度表达,使句子简单而优雅起来。

  以上就是小编为大家整理的关于PET写作考试要点及高分句型汇总,希望对大家有所帮助。更多pet考试语法讲解、pet考试含金量大吗等问题可以咨询我们。


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